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20 June 2008 @ 12:57 am
#012: Parents  
Am early! Now that Mother's and Father's days are passed for the U.S...

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Prompt: Parents
Location: St. Paul, MN
Mood: apatheticheadachy
shadow1905: edward_meteorshadow1905 on June 20th, 2008 09:38 pm (UTC)
Stronger, Bella/Jacob, Edward and Esme (PG)
He sat at the piano, his fingers still, his body still. Today he had watched Bella marry Jacob from the shadows of the church, and in the shadows he would stay for the rest of his inhuman existence. The punishment for his sins was to have the one taste of love dashed forever from his lips.

Then a pair of cool arms slipped around him and a wave of love and fear poured into his mind... Edward my son my dearest son I'm so sorry please don't leave me like my first baby did I love you we all love you it's not enough it will never be enough but please don't leave us this time don't leave me don't I love you I love you I love you...

Edward instantly turned and laid his head on Esme's shoulder. In a whisper he committed to an eternity of pain. "I will be stronger this time, Mama, I promise. I promise." I love you too...
Yawnk: Jakesavannahjan on June 20th, 2008 09:45 pm (UTC)
Re: Stronger, Bella/Jacob, Edward and Esme (PG)
I liked it! Such a believable situation between Esme and Edward.
Bloody Jack Flint: Rob: Gorhye on June 20th, 2008 09:47 pm (UTC)
Re: Stronger, Bella/Jacob, Edward and Esme (PG)
Wow, that's heart breaking and beautiful.
shadow1905: chemistry_in_biologyshadow1905 on June 20th, 2008 09:57 pm (UTC)
Re: Stronger, Bella/Jacob, Edward and Esme (PG)
Thanks, I actually cried when I wrote this, I'm such a sap!
bluesuzannebluesuzanne on June 21st, 2008 12:21 am (UTC)
Re: Stronger, Bella/Jacob, Edward and Esme (PG)
GUH. See that's why I had such a problem with Edward's suicide attempt. I get that he was in incredible pain and all but OMG POOR ESME. It would break her heart.

Loved this and loved how you brought him back to the piano. There's not enough emphasis on his music in the later books.
flimzyflopd4nce4m01 on June 22nd, 2008 12:41 pm (UTC)
Re: Stronger, Bella/Jacob, Edward and Esme (PG)
:( Poor Eddie. I love this, it's brilliant. Especially how Esme's thoughts read like thoughts.